Hi, Michelle! You have pretty voice and it's so difficult to sing a capella (voice without instruments) and stay on key; you did a good job at that. My suggestion to you is to give your song some variations in the tune. It is a nice tune to begin with, but by repeating it over and over like you have, you've made it monotonous and boring. I know you have the talent to come up with at least another three different verses that you could include in this song and make it more full-bodied. Then when you add some instruments, you'll probably have a really great song here. Thanks for sharing your song, Michelle. I'm looking forward to hearing more from you! *Hugs* Cynde