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Creative Writing, Intriguing & Inviting!!!
on 06 Feb, 08
Hi everyone...
I work hard / play hard, love cooking for my mum and driving sexy cars... I also write poetic stories, some may call it poetry other will call it madness lol.
basically, I would like to create of forum, where others that like to write this stuff or read it can exchange pieces to reveal a little more of who they are. Somewhat like a mascarade's ball, we dont just write a profile - we write poetry!!!
Heres an example for me:
I closed my eyes and swallowed her
Nicely
Allowing her to roam free
Anywhere she liked
She found herself surrounded by black energy
She lit up the cave within me
Gave warmth to every corner
She was kind
Took chances
Like unchaining a slave while his heart pounds to escape
I felt her caress me
It put a smile on face
Nearly…
She dangled in suspense of me
Dancing bare feet in every part
Found not what she thought
She saw the Gripping claw
The hand that had torn my heart
She ran
Her golden hair flowed and tangled in me
I caught her
She came back and allowed me all over her skin
She was my white gown
covering me
She hung my head down
So deep
But still I could not feel
She felt nothing back in return
Puzzled
her hopes burnt
she regurgitated herself out of me
Wiped the wet away from her mouth
And just stared at me
There was nothing she could fix
She closed her lips
and leaved…x
what do u think, what does this say about me?
do u think this could work?
im open to ideas for you all! x x x
I work hard / play hard, love cooking for my mum and driving sexy cars... I also write poetic stories, some may call it poetry other will call it madness lol.
basically, I would like to create of forum, where others that like to write this stuff or read it can exchange pieces to reveal a little more of who they are. Somewhat like a mascarade's ball, we dont just write a profile - we write poetry!!!
Heres an example for me:
I closed my eyes and swallowed her
Nicely
Allowing her to roam free
Anywhere she liked
She found herself surrounded by black energy
She lit up the cave within me
Gave warmth to every corner
She was kind
Took chances
Like unchaining a slave while his heart pounds to escape
I felt her caress me
It put a smile on face
Nearly…
She dangled in suspense of me
Dancing bare feet in every part
Found not what she thought
She saw the Gripping claw
The hand that had torn my heart
She ran
Her golden hair flowed and tangled in me
I caught her
She came back and allowed me all over her skin
She was my white gown
covering me
She hung my head down
So deep
But still I could not feel
She felt nothing back in return
Puzzled
her hopes burnt
she regurgitated herself out of me
Wiped the wet away from her mouth
And just stared at me
There was nothing she could fix
She closed her lips
and leaved…x
what do u think, what does this say about me?
do u think this could work?
im open to ideas for you all! x x x